Need your precious feedback

Hello Everyone!
Would anyone care to give their precious opinion on my design?
I am especially looking for feedback on:
the concept, presentation, color scheme,
technical aspects, fonts etc.
Many thank’s in advance for your valuable time!
ThingofbeautyBorn%20to%20Drool%20feedback1 .

The tongue is my favorite part. I think it would be good without any text. Just a big drooly donut.

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Thank you so much!
I really appreciate it:))
The whole idea was to create a funny twist on the phrase
“Born to Rule”.
Besides, I thought text and graphic designs
sold better than just text.

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Text looks funny to me… Maybe the font or color… (pink should be same as frosting) Maybe it should be tilted back like the donut.

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Thank you so much!
Actually, both the points make sense to me.
In all my other design’s I have kept the same color as the design
for the font. I don’t know why, in this case, I chose not to.